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Astro: Boy of the Stars episode 1 pt. 3Chapter 3The door to my house opened to my mom’s face, which was full of worry.“Toby!!” she cried, wrapping me in a super-tight hug. I gave a little groan of annoyance, “Where on earth were you?! I was so worried, I—,” she broke off, seeing Inspector Tawashi standing there. Her face got pale. “Toby…” she started, but Tawashi interrupted her.“Oh, there’s no need to be angry, Mrs. Tenma,” he said hurriedly, “Your son hasn’t done anything wrong.”“Oh? Then, why…?” My mom trailed off, her expression confused. “Good to see you home, Master Tenma,” our housebot said to me as I stepped away from the front door.“Hi, Orrin,” I said. I gave an abrupt yawn, suddenly feeling extremely tired.“Would Master Toby like something to eat?” Orrin asked.“No… No, I think I’m just going to g
PrologueSometimes life isn't what you expected it to be. Sometimes, things happen, for better or for worse, and there isn't anything you can do about it. Sometimes the exact opposite of what you wished for comes true, and you have to deal with it for the rest of your life, wanting to go back and change what happened…But sometimes good things happen, too. But that one good thing caused so many bad things to happen… and you wish that the good thing never came to you in the first place, so that the bad things never would have happened. That's the story I want to talk about. The story of a 13 year old kid with the I.Q. of Einstein. The story of how something good happened to him, but then so many bad things came about because of it. A rather typical story, if you think about it.But this is my story, and I’m telling it because you need to know the truth about me… of who I am, what I can do…. And what I’ve don