Vision: 5 stars, because I noticed and liked at once this beautiful work of yours, as soon as I saw the little thumb in your gallery. I love that the eyes are hidden, as they are simply unuseful to convey the emotion this picture shows. There are but a few grey colors on the body and this makes the little bright flames stand out and catch the attention of the observer.
Originality: 4 stars, because the themes this picture deals with are very deep and important, but also quite common. Anyway you've proved to be certainly capable to convey them in a new and original way.
Technique: 5 stars, because, as you said in the description of the work, it has been very hard to take this shot without an assistant or a model, but the final effect is great and it perfectly works in portraying your emotions.
Impact: 5 stars, because of many reasons I've already mentioned: this work succedes in impressing the observer and cannot be easily forgotten.